BREAKING THROUGH by d. Nichole King
– SYNOPSIS –
Two years after her brother Nate died during a Navy operation, aquator Nautia Olson’s nightmares began, and her ability to manipulate water became erratic. Anger, fear, joy, desire—they all trigger disaster.
Now, the Navy wants her for a top-secret mission, but Captain Riley Barton has his reservations. He’s read her file. He knows the damage she’s capable of, and yet—
If he can harness her ability—break through her walls—
She’ll be unstoppable.
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– EXCERPT –
I can’t move. My arms, my legs, they won’t budge.It’s pitch-black, but I think I’m inside of something. Something long and small…a capsule, maybe? Stretched out above my head, my fingers touch cold metal. Whatever I’m inside of is only as long as I am. I wouldn’t have much wiggle room, even if I could move. I don’t know how I got here or how long I’ve been tied up. I do a quick mental scan, searching for any piece of information. Nothing. I can’t even recall my own name. What I do know is I’m running out of oxygen. Each breath comes shorter, faster, and if I can’t control it soon, I’ll pass out before I figure out what’s going on. I close my eyes, suck in one deep breath, and let it out through puckered lips.
Calm down. Relax. Slow your heart rate.
What I tell myself comes from memory, though I have no clue where it came from. Whatever it is, though, it works. Somehow, my body is trained to go into hibernation mode on mental command. Now I need to figure out how to get out of here. With my eyes still closed, I concentrate on the smell of my prison. The more I know about this box, the better my chances are of escaping. The tang of what I inhale reminds me of burnt metal and rubber. There’s another scent too, one I can’t place, even though my brain insists I know. I dig deeper, filing through blank spaces that aren’t supposed to be empty. I probably shouldn’t be spending precious energy on it, but something tells me this strange odor is important.
Bright light pours over my face, and my eyelids fly open. Above me, sunlight streams through a circular window. I don’t know how long it will last, so I quickly confirm that I am inside some sort of capsule with silver metal walls. I also confirm that I was right earlier: the tube is small, barely big enough to fit my body. The window sits exactly six inches from the tip of my nose, though I have no idea how I know that. I see nothing above me except blue skies. I don’t hear anything outside either. I tug at the restraints holding me in place, but they don’t give. And then I feel something, something on the outside. The capsule I’m in is moving—upward. Shit.
Calm down. Relax. Slow your heart rate,
I repeat to myself. It’s working. My body is responding—
I begin to free fall.
I’m not in it for long before the tube hits water. I know it’s water because of the buoyancy of the capsule. But I know because of something else too—I feel it. Surrounding me, the water gives off its own energy, almost as if it’s surrendering to me, willing me to control it. Which makes no sense.
Above me, the sunlight begins to refract as it struggles to break through the water now covering the tiny window. That’s when I realize I’m sinking. Deeper, deeper underwater. As the light fades, the panic inside me rises. I try the calming mantra again, but nothing happens. Drops of water fall onto my forehead. The seal around my window creaks under the pressure of the water. I’m going to drown.
I struggle against the restraints. Twisting my body. Pulling at my wrists and ankles. I yank and kick, but it’s in vain. I’m trapped.
“Fuck!” I scream. Water sprays in from the seal, salty like the ocean, and suddenly I register where I am—in the Pacific Ocean, off the coast of South Korea. Except, I still don’t know why I’m here or how I got here. WhatI do know is that this is where I’m going to die.
I read the first half of this story in the Super Hero Anthology and I could not wait for the second half. I may or may not have pestered D. relentlessly about when I was going to get my hands on it. When it finally hit my kindle I was so excited to jump back into Nautia and Riley”s relationship and to find out what the hell had happened to Nautia’s brother.
I am not much of a fan of fantasy story lines, but I was reading this one specifically because D. wrote it. I was actually really pleasantly surprised by how interesting and well written the “super” powers were woven into this story. Nautia’s powers were unique and intriguing and oddly believable. Actually, I kind of loved everyone’s powers in this book, especially Kray, Nautia’s best friend. He was a great addition to the book.
I loved Nautia and Riley’s relationship, it was a wonderful slow build that was believable and endearing. I felt the pull between these two and the tension was palpable. Riley was hot as hell and sweet and cute and supportive and willing to put Nautia’s well being before his own.
What kept this story from being a 4 or 5 star read for me was the ending. I can’t explain it, but it just felt rushed to me and unfortunately, that pulled me out of the story. The resolution of the overall mystery didn’t really sit right with me and a few things that happened seemed to be glossed over when I thought they should have been given more weight.
I am a huge fan of D. Nichole King and I will continue to read all of her books. I think I just hold the bar so high for this author that this one fell a little short.
– ABOUT THE AUTHOR –
d. Nichole King
Born and raised in Iowa, d. Nichole King writes her stories close to home. There’s nothing like small-town Midwest scenery to create the perfect backdrop for an amazing tale.
She wrote her first book in junior high and loved every second of it. However, she couldn’t bring herself to share her passion with anyone. She packed it away until one day, with the encouragement of her husband, she sat down at the computer and began to type. Now, she can’t stop.
When not writing, d. is usually curled up with a book, scrapbooking, or doing yet another load of laundry.
Along with her incredible husband, she lives in small-town Iowa with her four adorable children and their dog, Peaches.
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